Hello everyone,
I’ve recently finished my first attempt at a screenplay and pretty much tripled what an average length should be.
I was just wondering if someone could give some pointers on what exactly I’ve done wrong, as I feel this story could easily be done under 2 hours.
I 100% don’t expect anyone to read this in its entirety.
My only source for making this has been Google, so any blatant formatting issues would be appreciated as well.
Thanks for any help.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1U0OAS41fiXJyG066ajrZ1p0wNn3BcFO4/view?usp=drivesdk
I’ve recently finished my first attempt at a screenplay and pretty much tripled what an average length should be.
I was just wondering if someone could give some pointers on what exactly I’ve done wrong, as I feel this story could easily be done under 2 hours.
I 100% don’t expect anyone to read this in its entirety.
My only source for making this has been Google, so any blatant formatting issues would be appreciated as well.
Thanks for any help.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1U0OAS41fiXJyG066ajrZ1p0wNn3BcFO4/view?usp=drivesdk