archived-videos Wishful Thinking (a short film) - looking for feedback/criticism!

maximum · Jun 5, 2015

I would love any feedback you guys could give me on my latest short film! I'd consider it my second "real" short film that I actually took seriously. Anyway, I would greatly appreciate any honest criticism you want to give me. Let me know how I could have improved it!
Thanks!!

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=8_krvhROGBQ

maximum · Jun 15, 2015

random comment

sfoster · Jun 15, 2015

gorillaonabike · Jun 18, 2015

Decent little short.

maximum · Jun 20, 2015

Thanks for watching!

ando913 · Jun 20, 2015

That was pretty good.

maximum · Jun 22, 2015

Thanks man!

Murdock · Jun 29, 2015

Dude on the left at the beginning, your lips are moving while the other guy is talking.

A fun short.

maximum · Jun 29, 2015

Murdock said:
Dude on the left at the beginning, your lips are moving while the other guy is talking.

A fun short.

haha, just noticed that... not sure what's going on there. :lol:

thanks for watching!