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- Thread starter Jean-Paul-Bankes-Mercer
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great short. The acting and music are the strengths for me. Everything else was great too.
Welcome.
Did fake layout on cards, did'nt want to push my luck (even though strange things happend after)
J.P.
J.P.
oooh what happened?
P.S. I didn't mean for that "oooh" to be taunting...I meant it like "oooh interesting"
P.S. I didn't mean for that "oooh" to be taunting...I meant it like "oooh interesting"
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I'm serious!!!!
It's just too freaky to talk about.
J.P.
I know Logan just kidding. Like ur web!
It's just too freaky to talk about.
J.P.
I know Logan just kidding. Like ur web!
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Good short. Good lighting, good acting.
The only problem I had was the pay off was, in my opinion, a little obvious.
Good stuff though.
Poke
The only problem I had was the pay off was, in my opinion, a little obvious.
Good stuff though.
Poke
It was okay, but the music was a little loud and tended to drown out the conversation a bit.
good work there.... just pretty much capping off what some of the others said... the music got a bit too loud but i guess it didnt overtake the narration which is the main dialouge of the film anyways...
other than that great work... i didnt see the end coming at all!
-Walt
other than that great work... i didnt see the end coming at all!
-Walt