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Painfully slow-moving.

Title is also extremely ambiguous.

Good luck getting that all sorted out in Michigan. It's been 14 years since CA passed that, and lawsuits, raids & arrests are still a daily occurence 'cos noone can agree on any common ground.
 
Yes, I'll agree with Murdock and Zensteve. Your soundbites are way too long. In my opinion, most of your soundbites should be considerably shorter, and it is up to you to piece them together into a sensible narrative. Keep it tight, and keep it moving. Good luck!
 
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