This is a short script i recently wrote. I would like any critiscim on it but more importantly i would like to have your opinions on how i could add to the story? Or any changes i could make to add more depth?
It follows a salesman before and after apocalyptic times.
http://www.filedropper.com/insurance
http://www.mediafire.com/?o095vzwuc3jw5wo
http://www.mediafire.com/file/o095vzwuc3jw5wo/INSURANCE.wps
Here is the PDF file for Flicker and anyone else interested. http://www.scribd.com/full/46901465?access_key=key-woaywto7d89srtzefyg
Tell me if the link doesnt work.
Thanks in advance.
It follows a salesman before and after apocalyptic times.
http://www.filedropper.com/insurance
http://www.mediafire.com/?o095vzwuc3jw5wo
http://www.mediafire.com/file/o095vzwuc3jw5wo/INSURANCE.wps
Here is the PDF file for Flicker and anyone else interested. http://www.scribd.com/full/46901465?access_key=key-woaywto7d89srtzefyg
Tell me if the link doesnt work.
Thanks in advance.
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