Hello!
I spent three days writing a 15-page short film script and was wondering if I could get some criticism, comments, ideas, feedback...etc. before I write a second draft.
This was written with the intent to film it - with some friends - with zero-budget.
Here's the link:
http://docs.google.com/View?id=dg5ngz85_3cb4n6kgp
Also, share any hints or tips you might have with relation to screenwriting; I'm not in film school and have never taken a film-related class before.
Thank you,
Jeremy
I spent three days writing a 15-page short film script and was wondering if I could get some criticism, comments, ideas, feedback...etc. before I write a second draft.
This was written with the intent to film it - with some friends - with zero-budget.
Here's the link:
http://docs.google.com/View?id=dg5ngz85_3cb4n6kgp
Also, share any hints or tips you might have with relation to screenwriting; I'm not in film school and have never taken a film-related class before.
Thank you,
Jeremy
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