Short Film _ Broll Footage_ Where I Live

Harleyquin

Member
One of the ideas for my short films. It took me a long time. There is a small paragraph in this short movie that I hope will surprise you, kakakaka! See and give me a comment.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x02AHewahWc


Let me comment! And if possible, please give me an idea of ​​short films, I'll perfect them! Thank you :D
 

pedramyz

Member
Change the first song or change the footage for that song. This song unnecessary builds up a suspense at the climax of which nothing happens.

I personally enjoy B rolls that are a bit focused on something specific. I don't like to see b-rolls as random footage from which I can not extract anything. The title of your film is where I live so I can understand why you did this. But if you wanna make a short film, I suggest you come up with some sort of a story and treat your B-roll footage in a way that it gives you a general idea what this is about even without the voice over or dialogue.

Shooting B-roll footage for practice is a great way of learning. But I wouldn't call random footage short film.
 

indietalk

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Very cool! Music and imagery can tell stories, as seen here. I get a "spring is here" feeling but more than that, I get a "been trapped inside here a long time (for whatever reason), and finally able to get out and be free." The day to night transition is pretty awesome, after the day out and return home. Grats! Keep at it.
 

Harleyquin

Member
Very cool! Music and imagery can tell stories, as seen here. I get a "spring is here" feeling but more than that, I get a "been trapped inside here a long time (for whatever reason), and finally able to get out and be free." The day to night transition is pretty awesome, after the day out and return home. Grats! Keep at it.
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It's great to receive compliments from you! I will have a lot of motivation and excitement to be able to make better videos! Thank you very much. Hope you will follow me and comment on my next video
 

Harleyquin

Member
Change the first song or change the footage for that song. This song unnecessary builds up a suspense at the climax of which nothing happens.

I personally enjoy B rolls that are a bit focused on something specific. I don't like to see b-rolls as random footage from which I can not extract anything. The title of your film is where I live so I can understand why you did this. But if you wanna make a short film, I suggest you come up with some sort of a story and treat your B-roll footage in a way that it gives you a general idea what this is about even without the voice over or dialogue.

Shooting B-roll footage for practice is a great way of learning. But I wouldn't call random footage short film.

Many thanks for your comments. As true as you say, I am still in the process of creating a complete short film. At the beginning of the video above I deliberately added a bit of suspense to increase the audience's emotions, maybe it was not very effective. I will make the following videos better and hope you will be there to see them and let me comment! :thumbsup:;)
 

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