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archived-videos school project :)

That's how a commercial works, alright. :cool:

I think you could have trimmed that down some (fast cuts for some fast Gatorade action!), but that's neither here nor there. Your teacher should like it. :)
 
thanks for the feedback. The version we turned in has a different tune and less clips in it. This is the extended version
 
Excellent for 35 minutes.

I'll just say this, it's something to consider in the future: Edit on the head as soon as the action stops. You did it most of the time. But, others you let it run some frames longer. It's just that much more polished within a group of unrelated shots.
 
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