Feedback:
Audio is not very good, sounds like is is from your camera's mic, or at least that your external mic was attached to your camera.
Not a big fan of the lighting, color, etc. in the house scenes.
Around 4:47, some pretty bad over-exposure.
Shot starting at 4:50, a shoulder rig would come in handy, a little too shaky.
5:50 Pretty bad hitting noises, and they sound like they are all the same sample.
Heartbeat became excessive and at one point sounded arrhythmic
Rest of the dark room scene: The acting got kind of bad right here, as well as the dialogue.
13:51 Blood spit was too much and too cheesy.
Final Thoughts: Gotta say, I found the first half decently entertaining, afterward I got less interested, and it became more predictable. The bald guy seems like he could eventually be a decent actor. Dialogue got cheesy as it went though. Mafia guy did a pretty good job.
Overall, decent start with a steady decline.