I couldn't watch it with sound but it looks like a good spot to me. Seems to fit the style of modern toy commercials (ie: manic sugar-high crazyness).
My only complaint is that I didn't care for the CC in the first couple shots. I think I know what you were going for but to me the skin just looks sickly...
Haha, not bad, I like the intense intro. The music comes in loud and though. Maybe make the intro louder or with more whimsical music?
Only other thing I saw is there's a lot or orange/brown from the table that clashes a but with the pink/purple/baby blue. Not sure how to grade that out though without jacking the fleshtones.
All-in-all, pretty good man! Having your own kids as actors makes it easy I'm sure
Sitting up here in Canada, it's amazing how many competitions we're not allowed in to. We typically have about 3 to 5 new competitions a month. you guys probably have more.
Good luck wheat. May poptent continue to be beddy beddy good to you.