Personal Web Page....Critique...

I just put a personal web page where I can have my portfolio, resume, etc together. Still a student so its looking slim, but it'll be nice to have everything on one site.

Anyone have any advice on things to change? What to write? etc?

I didn't really know what to write on the opening page. I'm pretty much still a student and really just looking for low/no-pay jobs right now.

Also on my 'contact' page should I do the email-as-a-picture thing so that it doesn't get picked up for spam? Is it really that big of a deal? I hate when I go to copy/paste someone's email real quick and its a photo so I gotta copy it by hand and re-check it 5 times to make sure I typed it right. Also should I include my phone number? or you think just email is sufficent now.

The web site is traviswilber.com

Any other advice or if you got examples or your own pages would be sweet. Thanks,
 
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None of the images in Portfolio seem to be loading for me.

I'd change some of the language to be more asertive or active.

Example, "I hope to be..." changed to "I'm studying to be..." or "working towards..."

Seems to do the job, though, most ways. :)
 
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