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archived-videos Ovum - Short Film

Wow, it’s pretty intense right out of the gate, and it looks and sounds great.
There was one focus pull that felt a bit much, but overall its sweet.

What did you shoot it with?

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i liked this a lot, so morbid. i thought the last line (or the only line) was a bit cliche and unecessary, but everything else was superb. I'm also interested in what you shot with.
 
It was a pretty good introduction, though I did find the constant shakes to be a little too much. The titles were very good, felt very spellbinding. I would like to see different angle shots to be used, so we can see the whole environment she's in.
 
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