All, here is my latest inspiration. Part of why I like this is that its Doable with what I have on hand. I have the leading role already cast (yes shes my kid!)
Please give it a quick read and suggest improvements or any other comments...
INT. YOUNG GIRLS BED ROOM-Morning
Early morning light is entering the upstairs bedroom window. The dull light moves on to the form of a sleeping young girl approximately ten or eleven years old. Her face is obscured by mussed blond hair. The girl grunts at the light, squeezes her eyes tighter closed and rolls onto her stomach. Quite farm sounds can be heard in the background, the digital alarm clock on the night stand is plugged in, but dark.
INT. YOUNG GIRLS BED ROOM-MORNING-later
Dreary daylight fills the young girls bedroom the sleeping form on the bed stirs and rises from the bed. The sounds of animals waiting to be fed, and duck quacking to be let out of the coop draw the girl from the warmth of her bed, into the cool mid morning air. JAMIE rises from the bed and begins her morning routine in the otherwise empty house.
JAMIE
I'm coming you stupid ducks
The ducks make even more noise in answer to her remark
EXT. FARM HOUSE-MORNING-LATER
Jamie is pouring feed from a rusted coffee can, the only sounds are the sounds of the fowls feeding, the gurgle of the creek running behind the pole barn and the slight breeze stirring the still bare branches of the Alder and Maple trees rising along the creeks banks. Jamie talks quietly to the ducks and chickens, calling them by name.
Jamie closes the gate to the duck yard and walks to the water storage tank. She climbs the step ladder, opens the tank and peers inside. The tank is almost empty. Jamie sighs and replaces the tank lid.
EXT. FARM HOUSE UNDER THE DECK-MORNING-LATER
Jamie walks from the water storage tank towards the quite generator waiting under the deck. She opens the gas tank of the generator and notices it too is empty, she moves to the nearby gas cans. She test lifts each can in turn, the first three are too full and heavy to easily move, the fourth one is only one quarter full. She carries the fourth gas can closer to the generator, removes the cap, and pours the fuel into the generators gas tank. She replaces the caps on the gas can and the generator gas tank. She bends and checks the engine oil level. She replaces the dip stick and pushes the generators start button, the generator roars to life, the noise of it shattering the still morning.
INT. FARM HOUSE BASEMENT-MORNING-LATER
Jamie is looking at the generator bypass electrical panel. The sound of the running generator is clearly heard. In the light from a single flickering bulb Jamie's finger traces the labels on the breakers: "Well and Pump", "Kitchen", "Gas Furnace Fan" and "Living Room." Jammie flips on the "Well and Pump", and the "Kitchen" breakers, she turns to leave, but then on impulse flips on the "Living Room" breaker too.
INT. FARM HOUSE LIVING ROOM-MORNING-LATER
Jamie is playing a video game on the big screen TV. The drone of the generator competing with the action sounds as Jamie plays the game. Bored with the game, Jamie tosses the game controller on the couch besides her, stands and walks into the kitchen. Jugs, pitchers, and water bottles fill one of the counters. Jamie checks the large orange construction water cooler in the sink and sees that is full enough, she struggles and removes it and places a large plastic pitcher in the sink. She sets the pitcher to fill as she turns to the cupboard. Jamie removes a box of powdered milk, pours some of it into a pitcher of water and stirs.
INT. FARM HOUSE DINNING ROOM-MORNING-LATER
With the cereal box tucked under her arm, the pitcher in one hand and the bowl and spoon in the other, Jamie walks to the dinning room table and pours cereal into the bowl. She plays with the cereal in the bowl, deciding to forgo the awful tasting instant milk and eat the cereal dry. The sound of her spooning up the cereal is much like the sound of walking on a gravel road....
EXT. HIGH WAY-Day
Jamie and DADDY are walking along the otherwise empty gravel road, Daddy is pulling the wagon with several gas cans. Jammie is carrying a fishing pole over her shoulder. It is a beautiful sunny afternoon.
JAMIE
Daddy, why don't we just drive the truck to the Noakes farm?
DADDY
Its such a nice day kiddo, and its not that far.
JAMIE
Can I fish in the river while you get the gas? I hate getting the gas out of the trucks, its so stinky.
DADDY
Tell you what. You fill the first can, to show me you know how, and THEN you can catch us some lunch!
Jamie and Daddy continue walking in companionable silence.
JAMIE
Daddy, where did everyone go?
DADDY
Honey, we've been over this before, I don't know anything new.. I...
JAMIE
I know Daddy, but I feel better when you tell me, I get scared sometimes...and when you explain it, it makes sense, at least a little..
DADDY
OK kiddo, OK, Ill tell you again..
INT. FARM HOUSE DINNING KITCHEN-MORNING LATER
Jamie finishes her breakfast and clears the dishes from the table. She washes the dishes by hand in the sink, the now full water containers crowding the counter. She places the hand washed dishes in the dishwasher to dry. She leaves the kitchen and walks towards the back room.
INT. Farm House Back Room-DAY
Jamie is practicing a simple piano song on the old upright, she turns the page of sheet music and ...
INT. FARM HOUSE BACK ROOM-EVENING
Jamie is sitting on the piano bench as she finishes turning the page of sheet music. The sound of the TV in the background, kids squabbling, mom directing the setting of the table for dinner and daddy typing on the nearby "back room" computer distract her from her practicing. Jamie sits, looking over Daddy's shoulder as he is working on something technical... after a few moments of no piano music..
Mom O.S.
Jamie, you still have 15 more minutes! Work on that new piece!
Jamie resolutely turns back to the piano...
DADDY
..oh wow, no way..... its really happening.. I cant believe its happening RIGHT NOW, in my life time...
Daddy knocks over the chair in his rush to leave the back room. Jamie, startled, follows him from the room.
JAMIE
Daddy, whats going on.. ??
INT. FARM HOUSE LIVING ROOM-EVENING
Jamie is standing in the hall, just out side the living room, watching her father with a curious smile on her face. Daddy, standing in front of the big screen TV stabs at the remote, changing to a 24 hour news channel. Amazed, Daddy slumps to thecouch, landing squarely on a toy that give a protesting squeak.
DADDY
Kim, honey, you better come see this, you wont believe whats happening...
Please give it a quick read and suggest improvements or any other comments...
INT. YOUNG GIRLS BED ROOM-Morning
Early morning light is entering the upstairs bedroom window. The dull light moves on to the form of a sleeping young girl approximately ten or eleven years old. Her face is obscured by mussed blond hair. The girl grunts at the light, squeezes her eyes tighter closed and rolls onto her stomach. Quite farm sounds can be heard in the background, the digital alarm clock on the night stand is plugged in, but dark.
INT. YOUNG GIRLS BED ROOM-MORNING-later
Dreary daylight fills the young girls bedroom the sleeping form on the bed stirs and rises from the bed. The sounds of animals waiting to be fed, and duck quacking to be let out of the coop draw the girl from the warmth of her bed, into the cool mid morning air. JAMIE rises from the bed and begins her morning routine in the otherwise empty house.
JAMIE
I'm coming you stupid ducks
The ducks make even more noise in answer to her remark
EXT. FARM HOUSE-MORNING-LATER
Jamie is pouring feed from a rusted coffee can, the only sounds are the sounds of the fowls feeding, the gurgle of the creek running behind the pole barn and the slight breeze stirring the still bare branches of the Alder and Maple trees rising along the creeks banks. Jamie talks quietly to the ducks and chickens, calling them by name.
Jamie closes the gate to the duck yard and walks to the water storage tank. She climbs the step ladder, opens the tank and peers inside. The tank is almost empty. Jamie sighs and replaces the tank lid.
EXT. FARM HOUSE UNDER THE DECK-MORNING-LATER
Jamie walks from the water storage tank towards the quite generator waiting under the deck. She opens the gas tank of the generator and notices it too is empty, she moves to the nearby gas cans. She test lifts each can in turn, the first three are too full and heavy to easily move, the fourth one is only one quarter full. She carries the fourth gas can closer to the generator, removes the cap, and pours the fuel into the generators gas tank. She replaces the caps on the gas can and the generator gas tank. She bends and checks the engine oil level. She replaces the dip stick and pushes the generators start button, the generator roars to life, the noise of it shattering the still morning.
INT. FARM HOUSE BASEMENT-MORNING-LATER
Jamie is looking at the generator bypass electrical panel. The sound of the running generator is clearly heard. In the light from a single flickering bulb Jamie's finger traces the labels on the breakers: "Well and Pump", "Kitchen", "Gas Furnace Fan" and "Living Room." Jammie flips on the "Well and Pump", and the "Kitchen" breakers, she turns to leave, but then on impulse flips on the "Living Room" breaker too.
INT. FARM HOUSE LIVING ROOM-MORNING-LATER
Jamie is playing a video game on the big screen TV. The drone of the generator competing with the action sounds as Jamie plays the game. Bored with the game, Jamie tosses the game controller on the couch besides her, stands and walks into the kitchen. Jugs, pitchers, and water bottles fill one of the counters. Jamie checks the large orange construction water cooler in the sink and sees that is full enough, she struggles and removes it and places a large plastic pitcher in the sink. She sets the pitcher to fill as she turns to the cupboard. Jamie removes a box of powdered milk, pours some of it into a pitcher of water and stirs.
INT. FARM HOUSE DINNING ROOM-MORNING-LATER
With the cereal box tucked under her arm, the pitcher in one hand and the bowl and spoon in the other, Jamie walks to the dinning room table and pours cereal into the bowl. She plays with the cereal in the bowl, deciding to forgo the awful tasting instant milk and eat the cereal dry. The sound of her spooning up the cereal is much like the sound of walking on a gravel road....
EXT. HIGH WAY-Day
Jamie and DADDY are walking along the otherwise empty gravel road, Daddy is pulling the wagon with several gas cans. Jammie is carrying a fishing pole over her shoulder. It is a beautiful sunny afternoon.
JAMIE
Daddy, why don't we just drive the truck to the Noakes farm?
DADDY
Its such a nice day kiddo, and its not that far.
JAMIE
Can I fish in the river while you get the gas? I hate getting the gas out of the trucks, its so stinky.
DADDY
Tell you what. You fill the first can, to show me you know how, and THEN you can catch us some lunch!
Jamie and Daddy continue walking in companionable silence.
JAMIE
Daddy, where did everyone go?
DADDY
Honey, we've been over this before, I don't know anything new.. I...
JAMIE
I know Daddy, but I feel better when you tell me, I get scared sometimes...and when you explain it, it makes sense, at least a little..
DADDY
OK kiddo, OK, Ill tell you again..
INT. FARM HOUSE DINNING KITCHEN-MORNING LATER
Jamie finishes her breakfast and clears the dishes from the table. She washes the dishes by hand in the sink, the now full water containers crowding the counter. She places the hand washed dishes in the dishwasher to dry. She leaves the kitchen and walks towards the back room.
INT. Farm House Back Room-DAY
Jamie is practicing a simple piano song on the old upright, she turns the page of sheet music and ...
INT. FARM HOUSE BACK ROOM-EVENING
Jamie is sitting on the piano bench as she finishes turning the page of sheet music. The sound of the TV in the background, kids squabbling, mom directing the setting of the table for dinner and daddy typing on the nearby "back room" computer distract her from her practicing. Jamie sits, looking over Daddy's shoulder as he is working on something technical... after a few moments of no piano music..
Mom O.S.
Jamie, you still have 15 more minutes! Work on that new piece!
Jamie resolutely turns back to the piano...
DADDY
..oh wow, no way..... its really happening.. I cant believe its happening RIGHT NOW, in my life time...
Daddy knocks over the chair in his rush to leave the back room. Jamie, startled, follows him from the room.
JAMIE
Daddy, whats going on.. ??
INT. FARM HOUSE LIVING ROOM-EVENING
Jamie is standing in the hall, just out side the living room, watching her father with a curious smile on her face. Daddy, standing in front of the big screen TV stabs at the remote, changing to a 24 hour news channel. Amazed, Daddy slumps to thecouch, landing squarely on a toy that give a protesting squeak.
DADDY
Kim, honey, you better come see this, you wont believe whats happening...
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