I fight for honor and my king - It may be that I march to my death, but it shall be remembered that I fought bravely and died in battle
Originally I was going to add in voice over, but felt it might take away rather than immerse people into it. Regardless the runtime is so short, there really isn't a need to explain much of what is going on IMO.I see a punchline here but I think you'd really benefit from more of a setup before the punchline.
Some voice over in the beginning of the film like
So we know what he's writing, where is walking and why