Hello guys,
Now that i'm in the process of writing a spec TV Pilot, I remembered to read somewhere that, when you're telling the story to someone, you shouldn't say "then this stuff happens, then that stuff happens", but yes "but this happens, therefore that happens".
That it's a bad sign when you constantly need to use the word "then" to explain the plot.
Do you agree? I hope I'm saying this correctly.
Thanks.
Now that i'm in the process of writing a spec TV Pilot, I remembered to read somewhere that, when you're telling the story to someone, you shouldn't say "then this stuff happens, then that stuff happens", but yes "but this happens, therefore that happens".
That it's a bad sign when you constantly need to use the word "then" to explain the plot.
Do you agree? I hope I'm saying this correctly.
Thanks.
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