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New idea i'm researching...any opinions?

Was hoping for some opinions on an idea i've been doing some research for.

It is set in the early 1900's during the birth of the mafia in NYC and follows a proud, courageous italian cop from his early days as a street sweeper, to his tragic demise as NYC's most respected and famous Lt.

Title: The Street Cleaner

Logline:

As New York's earliest Mafia family tightens its grip on Little Italy, the NYCPD's first Italian Detective sacrifices everything to battle the group's disturbingly violent bosses.


Any opinions would be great!
 
I know a little bit about mob movies, very little, but it's some. Most Italians living in the United States in the early 1900s were manual laborers. There were hardly any Italian police officers in NYC in the early 1900s due to discrimination. So you're going to have a little bit of an issue there, I think.

Read The Godfather. best research, in terms of feel.
Then read it again. You'll love it even better the second time.
 
Actually - that's kind of at the heart of my story. This is based on an actual detective i've been researching who was appointed to the police department by Theodore Roosevelt (who was the nycpd chief at that point). Ultimately, this italian officer formed "the italian squad" - a police unit made up of only Italian-American policemen, that is dedicated to fighting crime within the Italian community.

He pioneered techniques that are considered standard-operating-procedure today in the fight against organized criminal gangs.

He set up the first Bomb-Squad in the U.S. to study the bombs used by the gangs to intimidate their extortion victims. His team learned to traced the components and the bomb makers.
He set up the U.S.'s first Organized-Crime-Task-Force called the Italian Squad (later the Italian Legion), to study and infiltrate the gangs. He had his team chart the organizations and trace all their connections, illegitimate and legitimate.

He set out their strategy of disrupting the gangs' systems from all sides to make their operations unprofitable, relying on intra-agency cooperation, which was very rare in those days. They worked closely with Customs and Immigration officers, and with the Treasury Department's Secret Service agents.

He stressed the need to put away the gang leaders for any crime they could link to them, from murder, to tax evasion, to jay-walking, to illegal immigrant status, all in an effort to disrupt the gang's growth and to promote in-fighting in the illegal organizations, which provided a steady stream of informants.

His group set up a vast network of informants, paid and un-paid. He pioneered witness protection and intelligence-gathering programs to gain inside information into the crime groups.
He stressed the need for infiltration of the organizations to gain first-hand information. He was famous for having a closet full of disguises, everything from a newly arrived Italian immigrant outfit, to a priest, to a Hasidic Jew.
 
For those who are curious -
A Few of his Cases that Made the News

Early in his career when a beat-policeman, Petrosino came to the rescue of a Mr. Washington who was being mugged by three thugs. When the dust settled, Mr. Washington and Joe Petrosino were still standing. The three thugs were beat to a pulp on the sidewalk, and under arrest.

Police Commissioner Teddy Roosevelt promoted Joe Petrosino to Detective Sergeant assigned to Homicide, the first Italian-American to reach that position (1895). Petrosino developed a friendship with Roosevelt that lasted all his life long. The tough-good-guys were two of a kind.

Convinced an innocent man, Angelo Carboni, was being sent to the electric chair, Petrosino tracked the real killer down through two countries and over four weeks, using disguises, impersonations, informants, and cunning police sense. He saved the innocent Italian-immigrant from death, and sent the real killer down.

Under his command, the Italian Legion shut down an insurance scam that preyed on naive immigrants (1899). They were convinced to sign onto life insurance, but the seller made himself the beneficially. The innocent immigrant always died soon after.

Amazingly, he infiltrated an Anarchist organization based in Italy that was responsible for the assassination of Italy's King Umberto. Petrosino discovered U.S. President McKinley was one of the group's targets, and warned the Secret Service to have the President avoid Buffalo, New York. But McKinley refused to accept the warning, despite his Vice President Teddy Roosevelt vouching for his friend Petrosino's police skills. McKinley was assassinated soon after in Buffalo by an Anarchist, making Teddy Roosevelt President of the U.S. (1901).

He famously worked two so-called Barrel-Murder cases of note. A gangland counterfeiter who had talked too much was brutally murdered and stuffed in a barrel (1902). This case was linked to the more famous later case of another dead counterfeiter found in a barrel (1903) that led Petrosino to Vito Cascio Ferro, the newly arrived Sicilian mafia don who was working to organize the various Italian gangs (the Black Hand organizations) into one powerful crime group. Petrosino chased Ferro across the country to New Orleans, but Ferro escaped to Sicily and later became the prime suspect behind the assassination of Joe Petrosino 6 years later. Ferro kept a photo of Petrocino in his wallet and told all and sundry that he would one day kill his nemesis.

After numerous threats on the policeman's life, Petrosino gave a public beating (in self-defense, of course) to Ignazio Lupo, the Sicilian mafia's top killer (who buried most of the bodies at his family's stables in Harlem). Petrosino beat Lupo to pulp and stuffed him head-first into an ash-barrel on a street in Little Italy before the shocked and amused Italian immigrants, who only moments before would have crossed themselves in fear at the name of Lupo. Lupo never regained the standing he had before the beating, and was soon after sent down on counterfeiting charges.

His Italian Legion cut crime against Italian-immigrants by half, and succeeded in dismantling the Calabrian crime organization in NYC, and they deported it's don, Enrico Alfano, back to Italy (1907). Petrosino famously dragged Alfano all the way from the man's apartment down the streets to the police station, so all would see what eventually happens to criminals in New York City.

His Legion broke up a giant prostitution ring run by the Sicilian mafia in NYC (1909). Newly arrived Sicilian women were coerced into prostituting themselves to save their lives, or those of their relations in New York or back in Sicily. Petrosino managed to put away all but one of the mobsters involved.
 
Definitely a bad-ass! And he was dealing with some very ruthless and violent guys. He truly became a hero in every sense of the word. His funeral in NYC was attended by more than 250,000 people!
 
Yes this is cool Bustedstuff. Sounds like it would cost some $ to film. Are you thinking of writing and selling the script or are you wanting to make it too?
It's a great story and it's a film I'd love to watch.
 
Great possibilities for a story. Be wary of getting buried in a "laundry list" of his accomplishments (like one of my scripts that mostly bored readers). Go for the heart, his passion. If you write it well, I can see a star going for it if you can get it to them.

Cool!
 
Does sound like an awesome concept for a movie. Too bad they've long since torn down the Gangs of New York sets. If you're just scripting right now, no need, of course, to worry about that right now. There's a lot you could do with such an interesting character. Let us know how things develop!
 
Dude maybe you should read the Alienist by Caleb Carr. It takes place maybe a little earlier but its right as Roosevelt was the first Chief of Police in NYC. Its very good and basically the guy did a lot of the research about the setting and what is possible as far as police and detective work. Its historical fiction but very on point with what I've learned through my own affinity with history.

If he's a real guy then you have feasibility. Most movie goers won't think twice about researching a character to see if he is real but those that do will be slapped in the face when they discover he actually was a real guy.
 
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