Ok so here is my long overdue first short. I already know some improvements I need to make, and I would just like to generally know what you guys think. Yes it's far from good, but it's my first one, I wasn't expecting Hollywood standard
so yeah if anyone could watch it and let me know what you think, I'm making note of every piece of feedback I get to ensure that I improve with every film I make.
Thank you all for your time, and hopefully you can help a fellow indie filmmaker improve
http://youtu.be/tuHy8ZmLPk0
Thanks again,
Jack
![Razz :P :P](/images/smilies/tongue2.gif)
Thank you all for your time, and hopefully you can help a fellow indie filmmaker improve
![Smile :) :)](/images/smilies/smile.gif)
http://youtu.be/tuHy8ZmLPk0
Thanks again,
Jack