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editing My first gunshot - mussle flash test

Appreciate the time and effort you put into to costume, light and get some general quality into the test.

Id say go bigger with everything. Its dramatic action, its supposed to be better than real.
Make the flash 10x bigger.
Add a case eject
Add smoke
Animate the slide. its pretty easy and only takes a few frames.
Cut a frame or two from between the trigger pull to the recoil\flash, this will add a lot of "energy"

Thanks! :) :cool:
 
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