So here is my new short film I made. I'm still new at doing this, and this is only the second time that I attempted at making an actual short film. Any suggestions would be appreciated. Anything that was good, or I could improve on (besides acting of course, cause I didn't use any professional actors) One thing I know I need to work on is setting up a clear plot, because this was kinda all over. I started this project about 4 months ago, and kept re-writing the script over and over because I was so indecisive lol. Anyway, here it is.
"Vampires v. Witches"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_n4nEbua14&list=UUxrknKKiGkT4y_iWFDTgDkg&index=2&feature=plcp
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This was from last summer...
Hey it's Dave here, so I am very interested in filmmaking and I have just finished my first movie. So if you can tell me your opinions and where I can approve on I will greatly appreciate it.
*As a side note, I know acting is an essential point in establishing a film, but I'm not a professional actor (I'm only 15 lol) So I know the acting sucks.
Morgan, a young girl, finds that she may be the next victim to be at the hands of death from an unknown source cursing her family. It is her struggle, or stubbornness for that matter to act quickly and try to stop it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71uukafNqjI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71uukafNqjI
"Vampires v. Witches"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_n4nEbua14&list=UUxrknKKiGkT4y_iWFDTgDkg&index=2&feature=plcp
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This was from last summer...
Hey it's Dave here, so I am very interested in filmmaking and I have just finished my first movie. So if you can tell me your opinions and where I can approve on I will greatly appreciate it.
*As a side note, I know acting is an essential point in establishing a film, but I'm not a professional actor (I'm only 15 lol) So I know the acting sucks.
Morgan, a young girl, finds that she may be the next victim to be at the hands of death from an unknown source cursing her family. It is her struggle, or stubbornness for that matter to act quickly and try to stop it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71uukafNqjI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71uukafNqjI
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