archived-videos Mobile Phone film

[Leao]

Please have a look at my short film about being kept on hold:
Choose #086 On Hold complaint to watch film on Post Video Art
I'm very keen for some constructive criticsm! : )... leo

 

[lux]

The kidnap version looks great. I love the idea too. The only thing i dont like are the blue mats in the first two frames. I think they clash with the yellow nokia man. Apart from that its great!

 

[Leao]

Kidnap

Please take a look at the latest version of my mobile phone film called "Kidnap"
http://www.leoearle.com/kidnap/

What do you think about it being black & white? I'm adding sound later this month.

Any feedback would be much appreciated : )
leo

 

[Spatula]

I liked it, thought it was hilarious.
I know it's the point, but it lingered a little long on some shots... made me do my own ...lol
Great job.

 

[Leao]

Hi Spatula, are you sure that you're not referring to the On Hold movie rather than Kidnap (http://www.leoearle.com/kidnap/)?

peace

 

[zaman2002]

that was great i like them>>>>

 

[Leao]

Please release me

ive simplified the whole film http://www.leoearle.com/pleasereleaseme/

It could do with a few changes, what do you think? The sound quality needs improving a lot. Perhaps I could have Engelbert Humperdinck's "Please release me" at the end in monotone?

leao