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I enjoyed it. Couple of things. Does this guy look a little too sane? His hair is what cought my attention. It looks nice a fixed. Maybe a little teeth yellow to contrast the white of the vid. But these are small things really. In the end inconsequencial. Nice film.
 
Hey, nice work on your first short. I'm not gonna lie, I was a little confused about the story. My main piece of constructive criticism, though, would be to point out that it's quite "fat", meaning the vast majority of those shots can be cut, considerably. Honestly, I think you can tell the same story in half the time. Keep it moving -- we don't need each shot to linger for so long.

It looks good. You shooting on DSLR?
 
Looks nice. I would have liked to have seen some camera movement though.

I know the DSLRs have a 'jello effect' problem if you move fast, but would this apply to a slow dolly shot with maybe say a pan or tilt in there?
 
Dreadylocks said:
Looks nice. I would have liked to have seen some camera movement though.

I know the DSLRs have a 'jello effect' problem if you move fast, but would this apply to a slow dolly shot with maybe say a pan or tilt in there?
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I can't speak for the 7D or 5D, but with the T2i, you've really gotta move the camera quite fast.
 
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