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archived-videos Insomnio (Short film) -Please give me your point of view about my first "very" Short
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bro!
The song (while good) was very distracting. Didn't seem relevant, either.
So I watched it a few more times without the sound.
Didn't really tell much of a story (I guess that's why it's not in the Narrative section). I certainly didn't get why some objects were inverted. Cute effect with lighting the cigarette on the iPod.
Honestly, it looks more like an exercise in editing style and tempo more than anything else.
Btw, was that song by the White Stripes guy? (forgot the name of his other band)
So I watched it a few more times without the sound.
Didn't really tell much of a story (I guess that's why it's not in the Narrative section). I certainly didn't get why some objects were inverted. Cute effect with lighting the cigarette on the iPod.
Honestly, it looks more like an exercise in editing style and tempo more than anything else.
Btw, was that song by the White Stripes guy? (forgot the name of his other band)