Haha...thanks for that great critique. I agree on all points. I did this very "on the fly". I had a bit of an awkward Christmas this yr...call that half reality and half not. I had a partial idea of what I wanted to do, but I wanted it to end on a "high side" with a discovery of deeper meaning or something but...I was just blank. In the end, it ended up a lot more down than I'd originally intended.First off, having Gerard Butler in your movie gives it a lot of credibility.
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