Did you intend to write "the lawyer re-incarnates inside his wife's womb?". English can be painful.
Is this script is completed? If so, where is the majority of the script? In the conception/rape/sex part, where the lawyer turns mad or in the kid goes Chucky phase?
English sure can be painful sometimes. Like when, as in your quote above, the question mark after “womb” really ought to have been outside of the quotation marks. Or when you add an extra "is" in a place where it's not needed, rendering a sentence completely nonsensical. Or when the question of “where is the majority of the script?” doesn’t really make sense, as the answer would probably have to be “saved on my hard-drive”, which seems completely off topic. However, that’s forgivable, as, in context, most people reading it would be able to understand that the question really being asked is “when is the majority of your script set?”. You probably also need a comma after “mad” in the next sentence. Better still, you could have used a question mark, then asked the latter half of your question as a second, separate question. It would’ve read much nicer! Yep, English sure can be painful.
MiamiLife – To be fair to Sweetie, the first line does read that it is the lawyer who is reincarnated...
Again, not knowing exactly how your story plays out, it’s difficult to give any specific advice. Maz is right though; the structure of the script should dictate your logline. Time spent with each character should allow you to determine who the main characters are, so what should be stated in your log line.
It’s also worth noting that, with a log line, you’re trying to entice a busy reader in to your story. At this point, you want to sell the sizzle, not the steak. In other words, it’s ok to bend the truth (only slightly) in order to present a more compelling log line. For example, regardless of the true nature of this lawyer, describing him as a psychopath (instead of as a lawyer, since, as far as the story is concerned, this is irrelevant) may well tell us everything we need to know about him.
As it sounds like your story takes place in two distinct times, you’re probably going to want two distinct sections to your log line.
Again, I haven’t read your script, so I’m just thinking aloud here, but how about something like:
A narcissistic psychopath commits suicide, having been driven insane by the fear that the vengeful spirit of his latest victim has taken possession of his unborn child. Years later, the child, now six years old, begins to show signs that she may have inherited some unwanted traits from her father…
^^^That’s probably too long, and more than a little sloppy, but perhaps it may give you some ideas.