NSFW -- here is our newest debacle...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=slDbV6eMIxc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=slDbV6eMIxc
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lol it has it’s moments, and is more rounded out (Better) than Safety First, so things are improving.
For the no budget comedy style that (to me) it seems you guys are leaning towards, you might enjoy GetIcedPro’s Cursed Monkey Buisness.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hd79b6uSTzA&feature=related
Keep making them.
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For the no budget comedy style that (to me) it seems you guys are leaning towards, you might enjoy GetIcedPro’s Cursed Monkey Buisness.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hd79b6uSTzA&feature=related
Keep making them.
-Thanks-
thanks
everyone has said the same thing you guys are getting better don't stop. Although I really want to tone down the next one. This one was a little abrasive.
ok just watched the one you posted and LOVE it. AH life is good.
everyone has said the same thing you guys are getting better don't stop. Although I really want to tone down the next one. This one was a little abrasive.
ok just watched the one you posted and LOVE it. AH life is good.
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The biggest problem is - nothing happens.
Sure, there's a lot of words being used... but none of them define our hero, outline a problem or move the story forward at all. We're not given a reason to care about anyone, or anything, in the whole 6 minutes.
Is this part 1 of an episodic project? I'm not failiar with your previous vid.
Sure, there's a lot of words being used... but none of them define our hero, outline a problem or move the story forward at all. We're not given a reason to care about anyone, or anything, in the whole 6 minutes.
Is this part 1 of an episodic project? I'm not failiar with your previous vid.
thanks for your advice there is a video we did in jan. I thought the same things you just got done saying. I just felt by the final product Yeah thinks looked cool but did we actually get a story out and I am glad that people on this site are not afraid to say what they think. We have a strict police of not redoing anything... Just don't do the same mistakes again. Thank you again for your input.