I have a story full of action, crime and drama. I need help transferring it to a final script.
It is important to understand that this movie must be an efficient propaganda towards bad drivers.
Below is what particularly needs to be done:
1) Finalize number of Plots
2) Complete a character list
3) Put sequence in order
Here is the story.
Two brothers live in a country where traffic rules are heavily violated. The elder brother, as most of the people, violates traffic rules and puts his and others lives in danger... until his younger brother, who always respects laws, gets hit by a car and falls into coma.
The criminal driver manages to escape the place of accident, but the elder brother remembers the van's plate number and starts to search for it. He remains unsuccessful with his search and decides to take his revenge from everyone who dares to violate even a harmless traffic rule. He gathers a team that starts to punish infringing drivers crashing their cars publicly with baseball-bat or alike right on the streets. This team becomes a horror for all drivers. Some people support them, some do not.
The two brothers' father is a mid-rank police officer how gets an assignment to catch the team members. After a long chase he catches the one. To his surprise the member turns out to be his elder son.
I better stop here, since the end of the story is not ready yet. I honestly don't know what the climax and the ending should look like. But I wish the younger brother to wake up from the coma and be shockingly surprised to the way people start to drive their vans.
It is important to understand that this movie must be an efficient propaganda towards bad drivers.
Below is what particularly needs to be done:
1) Finalize number of Plots
2) Complete a character list
3) Put sequence in order
Here is the story.
Two brothers live in a country where traffic rules are heavily violated. The elder brother, as most of the people, violates traffic rules and puts his and others lives in danger... until his younger brother, who always respects laws, gets hit by a car and falls into coma.
The criminal driver manages to escape the place of accident, but the elder brother remembers the van's plate number and starts to search for it. He remains unsuccessful with his search and decides to take his revenge from everyone who dares to violate even a harmless traffic rule. He gathers a team that starts to punish infringing drivers crashing their cars publicly with baseball-bat or alike right on the streets. This team becomes a horror for all drivers. Some people support them, some do not.
The two brothers' father is a mid-rank police officer how gets an assignment to catch the team members. After a long chase he catches the one. To his surprise the member turns out to be his elder son.
I better stop here, since the end of the story is not ready yet. I honestly don't know what the climax and the ending should look like. But I wish the younger brother to wake up from the coma and be shockingly surprised to the way people start to drive their vans.
