I got this new idea one time about a short film about a teenager (boy) who has anxiety and insomnia. It basically happens in one setting (his bedroom) where the teen tries to sleep amidst his thoughts. The story will unfold through flashback and voice overs. I want to use the stream of consciousness style in writing the inner dialogue as to make it realistic. The film ends with him almost suppressing his anxiety and finally sleeping only to be woken up by his alarm clock a few seconds later. He gets up the bed and the credits will, then, roll.
Is there any suggestions on the thoughts and flashbacks stories I can use or if the plot is okay or if it needs changes?
Is there any suggestions on the thoughts and flashbacks stories I can use or if the plot is okay or if it needs changes?