Hi guys, here's a pretty absurd comedy about a couple of absurd restaurants.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GtcUV23mw-4
Any feedback is welcome!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GtcUV23mw-4
Any feedback is welcome!
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archived-videos Grene Urth Cafe (vegan parody)
- Thread starter DingbatComedies
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This was shot a lot better than the 'Rachael's Play', but I'd say the acting for the waiter was AGAIN way too much, and the script just terribly wrong. It just didn't seem funny.
In fact, the second restaurant scene was just bad - the waiter, again, seemed way too much, and the script was too much.
Again, it was okay, but needs a lot of work on mainly the script.
In fact, the second restaurant scene was just bad - the waiter, again, seemed way too much, and the script was too much.
Again, it was okay, but needs a lot of work on mainly the script.
Good substance though.
I thought it was pretty lame. Just my opinion though 