https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ylsaBghXvhM
How well does this video explain, and present itself?
How well does this video explain, and present itself?
I'm really sorry this hasn't worked out for you
I've been thinking about it a little and I think the biggest reason for the failure is because you're raising money for a business rather than a project. People will see your idea and, much as they may like it, they're seeing something that should, one day, be making you a good income. The projects that tend to do well are the niche passion projects where people can play to the inherent philanthropy of the human race 'I really want to realise my dream' rather than 'this is a great offer and will be a great business'.
That's my only thought. I think there might be other ways to try this if you are willing to go a different route. Out of curiosity; have you been trying to secure a bank loan?