J J Bolden May 13, 2011 #1 Hello all, this is my first film. I would love feedback, positive or negative appreciated. Film is MOS. Thanks. http://vimeo.com/23519478 Upvote 0
Hello all, this is my first film. I would love feedback, positive or negative appreciated. Film is MOS. Thanks. http://vimeo.com/23519478
Zensteve May 25, 2011 #3 Ending was weak-sauce. You certainly accomplished the task at hand, though. Telling a story with no dialogue. No problems following the scenario & setup. You should buy a tripod, though.
Ending was weak-sauce. You certainly accomplished the task at hand, though. Telling a story with no dialogue. No problems following the scenario & setup. You should buy a tripod, though.