so, i wrote a short screenplay last year that i just recently dug up.
it's loosely based on a "true" story that some guy i met in a bar told me concerning him and his ex-fiancee. who knows if it was him or the alcohol speaking, but whether it's actually true or not, it doesn't matter - the story stuck with me.
this is the first screenplay i've put out for people to read, so it makes me a little nervous because i know i'm no great writer. but i'd like to hear what you guys have to say about it. what are it's strengths? what are it's weaknesses?
i know there are a few spelling and grammatical errors i've got to fix and i've got to change the title too. also, i know it's written in a very prose-ish style as compared to a typical screenplay style, but my justification is that i obviously don't plan on selling this. i do hope, however, to film this pretty soon.
anyway, i'll stop blabbing. here's the link!
it's loosely based on a "true" story that some guy i met in a bar told me concerning him and his ex-fiancee. who knows if it was him or the alcohol speaking, but whether it's actually true or not, it doesn't matter - the story stuck with me.
this is the first screenplay i've put out for people to read, so it makes me a little nervous because i know i'm no great writer. but i'd like to hear what you guys have to say about it. what are it's strengths? what are it's weaknesses?
i know there are a few spelling and grammatical errors i've got to fix and i've got to change the title too. also, i know it's written in a very prose-ish style as compared to a typical screenplay style, but my justification is that i obviously don't plan on selling this. i do hope, however, to film this pretty soon.
anyway, i'll stop blabbing. here's the link!