archived-videos Clear Men: Shampoo Commercial for an Ad Competition

[karma policeman]

I'd like to share an ad we made in an advertising competition for Clear Men.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pw3auqGHR6Y

Would very much like to hear any thoughts regarding execution, storytelling and so on.

 

[Cracker Funk]

That's pretty slick! I think most members on this forum would be very proud to have a piece of work like this in their portfolio. I particularly like the editing.

The only constructive criticism I can think of is that the coloring is a little weird when he is in the shower. Otherwise, I think this is a really solid piece of work. Congrats!

 

[karma policeman]

Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated.

 

[wheatgrinder]

Neat, whats the target market for the advert? Where might this show if it wins? GOOD LUCK!

Thanks

 

[Murdock]

I want to wash my hair.