While working on one of my short scripts I noticed that I tend to repeat a character's name more than once or twice when describing what's happening.
I was wondering about the best way to make sure the reader knows who is doing what in the scene without repeating the names of the characters too often.
Here is an example out of the script:
I was wondering about the best way to make sure the reader knows who is doing what in the scene without repeating the names of the characters too often.
Here is an example out of the script:
Code:
The man on the floor is JACOB. The Psychopath forces Jacob's mouth open,
and pours liquor down his throat. Jacob coughs and turns over onto his stomach.
The Psychopath looks down at Jacob with an evil glint in his eye.