I just finished the first draft. I cannot seem to find a way to post it publicly, but will gladly send it to anyone who asks. Please give me an email to send it to, as thats the only ay I know how to send it. Comments preferred to be posted here or through an email. Feedback appreciated!
NOTE: Read before reading script. You may realize this script is not in the professional form. There is a REASON for that. First of all, please realize that I am in high school, so the people I will be working on this with are also in high chool. They know much less about this than I do, so I wanted to make it as easy for them to read as possible. I know it can seem a little ameteur, but I had them in mind. It should still be readable. ALSO, I am looking for advice mostly on the actual story, sequence, dialogue, etc, not the grammar mistakes in the script. Please give advice on that, and not on other stuff. I just want to see how good this story seems. Thanks again!
p.s. Any title sugg. for this script would be appreciated. Can't think of a darn thing!
p.p.s. I thought this would be a feature length project, but it seems it would only be about a half hour, maybe a little longer.
P.p.p.s. The story is of two groups of people (teens)who end up tangled up in a situation, but don;t know that the other group works for organizations that are enemies of eachother.
p.p.p.p.s.Kind of weird sypnosis at first glance, but the script tells it better.
NOTE: Read before reading script. You may realize this script is not in the professional form. There is a REASON for that. First of all, please realize that I am in high school, so the people I will be working on this with are also in high chool. They know much less about this than I do, so I wanted to make it as easy for them to read as possible. I know it can seem a little ameteur, but I had them in mind. It should still be readable. ALSO, I am looking for advice mostly on the actual story, sequence, dialogue, etc, not the grammar mistakes in the script. Please give advice on that, and not on other stuff. I just want to see how good this story seems. Thanks again!
p.s. Any title sugg. for this script would be appreciated. Can't think of a darn thing!
p.p.s. I thought this would be a feature length project, but it seems it would only be about a half hour, maybe a little longer.
P.p.p.s. The story is of two groups of people (teens)who end up tangled up in a situation, but don;t know that the other group works for organizations that are enemies of eachother.
p.p.p.p.s.Kind of weird sypnosis at first glance, but the script tells it better.
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