Posted the rough cut, quite some time ago, and got some great critique on things I should change. I didn't feel any sense of urgency to make the changes, until the movie would be screening somewhere. Anyway, I've...
- added some clips to highlight other people, to show that this movie isn't just two dudes.
- found a way to cut out all the four-letter-words ("shitzky-bitzky" isn't a curse-word, is it?).
- placed some narration over a stealing-stuff montage that originally had no dialogue.
Thanks, a bunch, to those whom offered their critiques.
http://www.vimeo.com/25387366
- added some clips to highlight other people, to show that this movie isn't just two dudes.
- found a way to cut out all the four-letter-words ("shitzky-bitzky" isn't a curse-word, is it?).
- placed some narration over a stealing-stuff montage that originally had no dialogue.
Thanks, a bunch, to those whom offered their critiques.
http://www.vimeo.com/25387366
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