If you write a line using boring words, then guess what, it will read as a
boring line. There is no magic that will make the words jump off the page
and slap the reader in the face. In order to grab the reader’s aFenDon, you
have to write in an entertaining and interesDng way.
Jake walks into the room. (we have no idea of his mood)
BeFer alternaDve words:
Jake creeps into the room. (he could be scared)
Jake slinks into the room. (he could be ashamed)
Jake slumps into the room. (he could be depressed)
Jake marches into the room. (he could be confident)
Jake strides into the room. (he could be angry)
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boring line. There is no magic that will make the words jump off the page
and slap the reader in the face. In order to grab the reader’s aFenDon, you
have to write in an entertaining and interesDng way.
Jake walks into the room. (we have no idea of his mood)
BeFer alternaDve words:
Jake creeps into the room. (he could be scared)
Jake slinks into the room. (he could be ashamed)
Jake slumps into the room. (he could be depressed)
Jake marches into the room. (he could be confident)
Jake strides into the room. (he could be angry)
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