I'm in a feature writing class, I have to pitch to my class and here's my concept:
Nurse Irene is an average single mom neck deep in debt, with a disabled son and a girlfriend who’s married to a man. She’s played it safe her whole life and has nothing to show for it. While tending to the wounds of a murder witness, Irene comes across a lump sum of cash attached to her patient. Against an arid Texas landscape, we follow Irene as she chases the cash, and everyone is on her tail. Irene is ultimately at odds with what is right and what feels right as she navigates a life of crime.
What am I missing for it to be a complete pitch? How specific/ vague should it be for a pitch? Any help will be appreciated.
Nurse Irene is an average single mom neck deep in debt, with a disabled son and a girlfriend who’s married to a man. She’s played it safe her whole life and has nothing to show for it. While tending to the wounds of a murder witness, Irene comes across a lump sum of cash attached to her patient. Against an arid Texas landscape, we follow Irene as she chases the cash, and everyone is on her tail. Irene is ultimately at odds with what is right and what feels right as she navigates a life of crime.
What am I missing for it to be a complete pitch? How specific/ vague should it be for a pitch? Any help will be appreciated.