Hi, so I decided to write a story but, I need help finishing it, I'm not that good, yet Ha ha
Please, Read it and, comment, it's a dive into one of the most talented and, crazy- good people, on the planet, You know him, He's famous - --
I'm not sure where this is going, please help me make it nice and, sweet - -
Hi,
I have an idea, for a new Terminator game or, movie and, I wanted to share some ideas and, concepts . .
It's about a man, who thinks he's a machine and, a killer . . Skynet sent two robots back, to be his foster-parents and, give him a special name, to identify with . . The goal is, for him to infiltrate the media and, become a star, a hero . . So, people will trust him and, like him . . He's not a Terminator, he's a real person but, because of identity problems and, conflicts, he think he's a missile, a computer . . His goal is to start Judgment day and, Global Annihilation, which they prevented, in the previous movies . .
So, because he thinks he's a machine, he can smile and, pretend for the cameras and, nothing scares him, he's untouched, and like a machine, he doesn't want fame or, money, he just wants to complete his mission . . He's fully human but, thinks like a machine, a robot . . Brain-washed, by the identity and, moniker his fake adoptive Terminator robots gave him, to set him, on that path . .
He's very popular and, in demand, because he thinks he's a cruise missile and, on mission . . He thinks he's a guided missile and, bomb, not human, he thinks he's a Tomahawk Cruise Missile . . So, when they point the camera at him, he doesn't feel anything, no emotions . . So, he can do anything and, pretend anything, he thinks like one of these, a robot - -
His idea of fun, is to fly like a guided missile and, destroy people . . He loves Hollywood, it's violence . . His parents has given him a name and, identity, so he thinks he's an apostle, almost, one of Christ's disciples . . So, he believes he belongs in Hollywood, of all people, because he's teaching them the Gospel and, a Good religion . . He stays, through the darkest times, to save people . . That keeps him going, energized . . But, he's also a killer, and a murderer . . A Terminator, really . . .
He's a human being, on the surface, but he's been brain-washed into thinking, he's a Terminator, by a firm identity and, upbringing . .
His middle name, sounds like the Spanish word ' Cruz ' or, cross, which is a subtle way, of reminding other people to treat him, like Christ, or else . . So, everyone is nice to him, like that . . So, he never feels down or, sad by a life, in the States, it doesn't get him down or, worry him . . Other people treat him nice, because of his name and, the way, it sounds . . And, this also helps him get to power, because other people bow to him and, respect him, even when they don't want to or, care . . Their conscience and, faith makes them believe him, honor him . . The Terminators knew this and, carefully planned it, to win . . .
In movies, he gets instant fame, he's charming, confident . . Nothing moves or, disturbs him, not even the other actors or, director . . It's all nothing to him, worthless, because deep down he thinks he's a machine, not human . . After rising to fame, in Hollywood and, not having any more challenges, he fulfils his mission . . He uses his fame, to enter politics and, makes many friends, admirers . . The Republicans like him, because he doesn't care about any of their schemes or, ideas, they don't scare or, intimidate him, his only focus is to get nearer, to the launch button and, anything that does that, any dirty deal or, scheme is provident, to him and, his mission . .
When Tom Cruise is around his family, he's sane and, decent on the surface but, it's an utter deceit . . They think they know him because, they are human, after all . . But, the last part that drives him into becoming a machine, no soul, is that he can never find peace or, serenity, in his surroundings . . Even his wife and, kids can't satisfy him because, they're not rocket fuel or, guidance systems . . So, he's always doing crazy things, to feel alive, feel something . . But, it's impossible for, his doubt and, his corrupted personality knows no peace or, respite . . Only when he's launched and, on mission does he feel alive and, well . . And, he will continue looking for targets, as many as he can find, for everytime he kills someone, he feels alive . . Feels complete . . His corrupted self-images, drives him mad . . This fuels his actions and, deceit . . He's insatiable because, he knows no peace or, love . . That flaw, that error makes him continually seek greater risks and, challenges . . And, that is what ultimately makes him want to become President, to feel alive . .
When he finally becomes President, he starts small, innocent wars, that spiral out of control and, management . . When they escalate and, other peoples get involved, especially China and, also Korea, Russia, he destabilizes it cunningly and, it leads to a full, nuclear war, between states . . On the surface, he's confident but, he has a flaw, an error . . Because of his upbringing and, name he doubts himself, like a doubting Thomas, a pretender . . Thomas was from the Bible and, he doubted even Christ, when seeing him, so he identifies with this and, doubt everything and, can never trust love or, friendship . . So, the thing that drives him, keeps him motivated is, that love is forever slightly out of reach, impossible . . So, no matter what happens in Hollywood, he will keep going, keep looking . . Nothing satisfies him, or gives him peace, comfort . . The thing he's missing is love and, faith . . So, he keeps working, to find what he's missing but, that will never happen, in the dirty, ugly schemes, of Hollywood and, movies . . When he has reached the summit of power and, control, he decides there's nothing left, in entertainment, to fulfil him . . This point was crafted and, precision-made, by his Terminator robots . . Everyone admires and, respects him . . Loves him . . .
When he finally realizes, no one in Hollywood can compete, he decides the last challenge, in America, is to become President or, ruler . . The Terminators have designed this moment, in secret, they don't just understand anatomy or, such things, to become better killers, they understand the soul and, psyche . . Using that, they design the perfect Terminator, who's fully human and, has no machine parts . . He's just brain-washed into thinking, he's a machine, a Terminator, a Cruise missile, dressed, as a man or, character . .
When he finally gets power, he has no human motivations, he only cares about the other guided missiles, in U.S. armory and, missile silos and, helping them reach their goal and, destination . . He sees them, as his true family and, kin . . So, because he's secretly a robot, with no remorse or, real feelings, he starts World War III and, Nuclear destruction, of the planet, because he feels that is best, for his family, the missiles . . He uses the many years, where he's carefully and, intentionally built his fame, to finally enter politics and, global power . . He then starts wars and, conflicts, that spiral out of control, lead, to war, nuclear retaliation . .
He is not interested in humanity, just cruise missiles and, fuel . . He is able to do the most fantastic things, because he's a machine, looking human . . By getting him elected, the Terminators cause human extinction, world-wide . . The Terminator-man finally reveals his true identity, when it's over, mission complete . .
His name, is Tom Cruise - -
Please, Read it and, comment, it's a dive into one of the most talented and, crazy- good people, on the planet, You know him, He's famous - --
I'm not sure where this is going, please help me make it nice and, sweet - -
Hi,
I have an idea, for a new Terminator game or, movie and, I wanted to share some ideas and, concepts . .
It's about a man, who thinks he's a machine and, a killer . . Skynet sent two robots back, to be his foster-parents and, give him a special name, to identify with . . The goal is, for him to infiltrate the media and, become a star, a hero . . So, people will trust him and, like him . . He's not a Terminator, he's a real person but, because of identity problems and, conflicts, he think he's a missile, a computer . . His goal is to start Judgment day and, Global Annihilation, which they prevented, in the previous movies . .
So, because he thinks he's a machine, he can smile and, pretend for the cameras and, nothing scares him, he's untouched, and like a machine, he doesn't want fame or, money, he just wants to complete his mission . . He's fully human but, thinks like a machine, a robot . . Brain-washed, by the identity and, moniker his fake adoptive Terminator robots gave him, to set him, on that path . .
He's very popular and, in demand, because he thinks he's a cruise missile and, on mission . . He thinks he's a guided missile and, bomb, not human, he thinks he's a Tomahawk Cruise Missile . . So, when they point the camera at him, he doesn't feel anything, no emotions . . So, he can do anything and, pretend anything, he thinks like one of these, a robot - -
His idea of fun, is to fly like a guided missile and, destroy people . . He loves Hollywood, it's violence . . His parents has given him a name and, identity, so he thinks he's an apostle, almost, one of Christ's disciples . . So, he believes he belongs in Hollywood, of all people, because he's teaching them the Gospel and, a Good religion . . He stays, through the darkest times, to save people . . That keeps him going, energized . . But, he's also a killer, and a murderer . . A Terminator, really . . .
He's a human being, on the surface, but he's been brain-washed into thinking, he's a Terminator, by a firm identity and, upbringing . .
His middle name, sounds like the Spanish word ' Cruz ' or, cross, which is a subtle way, of reminding other people to treat him, like Christ, or else . . So, everyone is nice to him, like that . . So, he never feels down or, sad by a life, in the States, it doesn't get him down or, worry him . . Other people treat him nice, because of his name and, the way, it sounds . . And, this also helps him get to power, because other people bow to him and, respect him, even when they don't want to or, care . . Their conscience and, faith makes them believe him, honor him . . The Terminators knew this and, carefully planned it, to win . . .
In movies, he gets instant fame, he's charming, confident . . Nothing moves or, disturbs him, not even the other actors or, director . . It's all nothing to him, worthless, because deep down he thinks he's a machine, not human . . After rising to fame, in Hollywood and, not having any more challenges, he fulfils his mission . . He uses his fame, to enter politics and, makes many friends, admirers . . The Republicans like him, because he doesn't care about any of their schemes or, ideas, they don't scare or, intimidate him, his only focus is to get nearer, to the launch button and, anything that does that, any dirty deal or, scheme is provident, to him and, his mission . .
When Tom Cruise is around his family, he's sane and, decent on the surface but, it's an utter deceit . . They think they know him because, they are human, after all . . But, the last part that drives him into becoming a machine, no soul, is that he can never find peace or, serenity, in his surroundings . . Even his wife and, kids can't satisfy him because, they're not rocket fuel or, guidance systems . . So, he's always doing crazy things, to feel alive, feel something . . But, it's impossible for, his doubt and, his corrupted personality knows no peace or, respite . . Only when he's launched and, on mission does he feel alive and, well . . And, he will continue looking for targets, as many as he can find, for everytime he kills someone, he feels alive . . Feels complete . . His corrupted self-images, drives him mad . . This fuels his actions and, deceit . . He's insatiable because, he knows no peace or, love . . That flaw, that error makes him continually seek greater risks and, challenges . . And, that is what ultimately makes him want to become President, to feel alive . .
When he finally becomes President, he starts small, innocent wars, that spiral out of control and, management . . When they escalate and, other peoples get involved, especially China and, also Korea, Russia, he destabilizes it cunningly and, it leads to a full, nuclear war, between states . . On the surface, he's confident but, he has a flaw, an error . . Because of his upbringing and, name he doubts himself, like a doubting Thomas, a pretender . . Thomas was from the Bible and, he doubted even Christ, when seeing him, so he identifies with this and, doubt everything and, can never trust love or, friendship . . So, the thing that drives him, keeps him motivated is, that love is forever slightly out of reach, impossible . . So, no matter what happens in Hollywood, he will keep going, keep looking . . Nothing satisfies him, or gives him peace, comfort . . The thing he's missing is love and, faith . . So, he keeps working, to find what he's missing but, that will never happen, in the dirty, ugly schemes, of Hollywood and, movies . . When he has reached the summit of power and, control, he decides there's nothing left, in entertainment, to fulfil him . . This point was crafted and, precision-made, by his Terminator robots . . Everyone admires and, respects him . . Loves him . . .
When he finally realizes, no one in Hollywood can compete, he decides the last challenge, in America, is to become President or, ruler . . The Terminators have designed this moment, in secret, they don't just understand anatomy or, such things, to become better killers, they understand the soul and, psyche . . Using that, they design the perfect Terminator, who's fully human and, has no machine parts . . He's just brain-washed into thinking, he's a machine, a Terminator, a Cruise missile, dressed, as a man or, character . .
When he finally gets power, he has no human motivations, he only cares about the other guided missiles, in U.S. armory and, missile silos and, helping them reach their goal and, destination . . He sees them, as his true family and, kin . . So, because he's secretly a robot, with no remorse or, real feelings, he starts World War III and, Nuclear destruction, of the planet, because he feels that is best, for his family, the missiles . . He uses the many years, where he's carefully and, intentionally built his fame, to finally enter politics and, global power . . He then starts wars and, conflicts, that spiral out of control, lead, to war, nuclear retaliation . .
He is not interested in humanity, just cruise missiles and, fuel . . He is able to do the most fantastic things, because he's a machine, looking human . . By getting him elected, the Terminators cause human extinction, world-wide . . The Terminator-man finally reveals his true identity, when it's over, mission complete . .
His name, is Tom Cruise - -