A Hazardous Favor

[sfoster]

I really missed being on set and using my camera, so I produced this.
Original score by new IT member @GGilman22

 

[mlesemann]

I like that a lot.
Nicely written, both actresses did a good job, and I like the score by @GGilman22

There was one spot where the glass hitting the table seemed a bit hard & might benefit from an edit, but that's my only note.

It almost feels like the beginning of an episodic? A few short bits that combine to tell a longer story?

But no worries if this is the whole thing

 

[sfoster]

I like that a lot.
Nicely written, both actresses did a good job, and I like the score by @GGilman22

There was one spot where the glass hitting the table seemed a bit hard & might benefit from an edit, but that's my only note.

It almost feels like the beginning of an episodic? A few short bits that combine to tell a longer story?

But no worries if this is the whole thing

Thanks!

It didn't quite build to the dramatic crescendo at the end I had hoped for, (no 'screw you') but I'm glad you liked it!
Good note about the glass sound effect.

 

[Nate North]

Really nice job on this it looks like you put a lot of effort into getting the lighting right. Solid dramatic scene. The situation feels believable.

 

[GGilman22]

Happy to be a part of this project, it came out really well.

 

[Iren]

Keep it the way as it is. I too liked it without the music, liked it raw.
Oh and Yes, last night I watched a porn
Skin tone fair, no hiding. Alas my guilty mind still craves for beauty.

I'll rather burn in he'll
Than inhale the heaven's
Deceitful smell.

 

[Iren]

She gifted me, a drawing book
the yellow birds, forever free
To the moon, the lost dinghy
moonbeam fell, on the scenery
the moon, a rabit's tummy