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A Hazardous Favor

I like that a lot.
Nicely written, both actresses did a good job, and I like the score by @GGilman22

There was one spot where the glass hitting the table seemed a bit hard & might benefit from an edit, but that's my only note.

It almost feels like the beginning of an episodic? A few short bits that combine to tell a longer story?

But no worries if this is the whole thing :)
 
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I like that a lot.
Nicely written, both actresses did a good job, and I like the score by @GGilman22

There was one spot where the glass hitting the table seemed a bit hard & might benefit from an edit, but that's my only note.

It almost feels like the beginning of an episodic? A few short bits that combine to tell a longer story?

But no worries if this is the whole thing :)
Thanks!

It didn't quite build to the dramatic crescendo at the end I had hoped for, (no 'screw you') but I'm glad you liked it!
Good note about the glass sound effect.
 
Keep it the way as it is. I too liked it without the music, liked it raw.
Oh and Yes, last night I watched a porn
Skin tone fair, no hiding. Alas my guilty mind still craves for beauty.

I'll rather burn in he'll
Than inhale the heaven's
Deceitful smell.
 
She gifted me, a drawing book
the yellow birds, forever free
To the moon, the lost dinghy
moonbeam fell, on the scenery
the moon, a rabit's tummy
 

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