I didnt want to take away from the competition thread BUT... i really wanted everyone to discuss the videos more... in hopes for my own gain (of course) but to also shed light on what we (as contestants) are doing right or wrong in our videos...
if any of the other contestants want to post your videos in here too for criticism... please don't hesitate to
first off... i'm sorry about the loss of the top part of my head... as you can see in the video ... i have no brain
so of course it shows in the video hahahahhah i have a mohawk and i am not allowed to go to work with out a hat on... its a deal i made with my boss so i could have a mohawk... but as it turns out... 99.8 percent of the time i wear the damn hat now hahahahaha and it is such a part of me i forget to take it off... and if i had my beanie on or my white or blue hat this would have never happened... but... as you can see... i am absent headed in the video
now with out any more wait... please view and tell me what you would change... or what you think i should do differently...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6KX-s6IZdh8
please dont try and hold back as to sound polite... i have thick skin... i want everything you can think of that i did wrong...
these are the things i think i did wrong... am i write or wrong at them
1. i should have had two side light sources instead of the one front light
2. the damn hat hahahahahah
3. there are a few times were you can see a small flash of light in the back ground... i should have tin foiled over the windows instead of just double curtains.
4. there are times were the crying seems to be to much... maybe i should have pulled it back some
5. i like tacos... so i am a fat bastard and i dont look pleasant in front of the camera hahahahahahahaha
if any of the other contestants want to post your videos in here too for criticism... please don't hesitate to
first off... i'm sorry about the loss of the top part of my head... as you can see in the video ... i have no brain
so of course it shows in the video hahahahhah i have a mohawk and i am not allowed to go to work with out a hat on... its a deal i made with my boss so i could have a mohawk... but as it turns out... 99.8 percent of the time i wear the damn hat now hahahahaha and it is such a part of me i forget to take it off... and if i had my beanie on or my white or blue hat this would have never happened... but... as you can see... i am absent headed in the video
now with out any more wait... please view and tell me what you would change... or what you think i should do differently...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6KX-s6IZdh8
please dont try and hold back as to sound polite... i have thick skin... i want everything you can think of that i did wrong...
these are the things i think i did wrong... am i write or wrong at them
1. i should have had two side light sources instead of the one front light
2. the damn hat hahahahahah
3. there are a few times were you can see a small flash of light in the back ground... i should have tin foiled over the windows instead of just double curtains.
4. there are times were the crying seems to be to much... maybe i should have pulled it back some
5. i like tacos... so i am a fat bastard and i dont look pleasant in front of the camera hahahahahahahaha
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