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Very good indie feel to it. I'm not a filmmaker, just a screenwriter, so all I can say is that the story could use a little more dramatic conflic, but the film aspect of it was really well done. I really liked it.

The potential for this concept is huge. Very well done.

Scene Headings, Name when using Dialogue, Names (on first introduction), when someone is YELLING, and NOISE! But go to SimplyScripts.com and read The Silver Linings Playbook. This writer caps A LOT!

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The Other House - working title © 2012 A successful author and writer on Parapsychology, DAVID OWENS, moves into an abandoned home to do hands-on research after rumors surface of the previous tenant’s strange disappearance. During his research, David discovers a hidden doorway in the basement...

Maybe they could be test subjects, created by the Government, because the Government wants to know that if "Superhuman" people ever did exist, if they would indeed be able to overthrow the Government. So the Government, ie, NSA, FBI, etc. would be the Antagonist.

I think your Head grew an Arm out of it. You had something really good going. Think "Secret Window"...the main Character should act alone and be alone in his experiments. Each one getting worse and worse and more scarier. ie Spending the night in a grave yard and then spending the night in a...

I hope, over the course of their therapy sessions, that the Psych either helps her to love herself for who she isn't...or that he falls in love with her for who she is. Imagine him cheating on his stunningly beautiful, but lifeless Wife with this physically disfigured, but alive and emotionally...

Write a brief backstory to your character... Was his father and mother killed in a horrible accident when he was a young boy? Was he raised in an overly protective Christian-faith home? Was he bullied in high school, or was HE the bully? Did he do drugs? Did he drink? Did he have any...

If you have to drink enough alcohol to get drunk in order to write something good, it doesn't make you a good writer, it just makes you a good alcoholic. You look at famous Rock Stars who have written amazing lyrics while hopped up on heroin....Were they capable of writing those same lyrics...

I would partially agree that your Actors or "Characters" make or break the reality in a movie. But the most important thing is your story. You can't have Dragons flying around while vampires shoot lazer guns at ghosts that have the power to travel through time, all while aliens invade the...

People that use language that often usually seem very jittery and anxious. If so, have your Pro chain smoking and nervously tapping his a spoon or fork or his hand on the table to show signs. The language that is spoken needs to stand alone with your character...meaning, if you were to close...

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Who is your target audience? What rating do you expect to get; PG, PG-13, R...? IMO, love scenes are rarely needed in stories. There's so many other ways to drive your story forward. There are "implied" love scenes where we see two people kissing and then there's a FADE TO BLACK: which is...

Really good concept. Fantasy SciFi has given you some really good thoughts to consider, so I don't have much to add. All I will add is this: Have as much conflict in as many scenes as possible. Is it suitable to have a Red Herring? If Adrian saves the Cat in the end at the cost of his best...

Excellent short doc, homie. Definitely has potential to be something big. You could possibly create a "Webisode" that follows "the lives of three young, unsigned skateboarders" in their hopes of becoming sponsored. Also, re: the doc, You might want to add some out Credits while rolling OVER -...

FD 7... loving it. Not sure if I really need the upgrade to 8, but I love 7.

You should put together a team of four trusting people...create a genre, and have each person write an act...Act II would be divided into two halves, normally. Unless you wanted to get really crazy, and get 110 people together and have each one write only one page... It would be interesting...