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I enjoyed it. Some nice dialogue in there. I'd try to specify where they are within the church. Was the man just sitting? Confessional? And then change up the scenery a bit. Have the pastor stand over him, then sit beside then the final standing of both. Other than that I liked it.

Sorry for the delay. Had work. I liked it. Caught myself laughing out loud twice I counted, which is good. Opening hooked me. Characters are set up nicely, each one different/ dynamic. You got any tentative titles, yet?

I think it's private right now Murdock?

Starting this year, i decided to write a feature script every three months. Making four a year. Even if one of them sucks to the max, I get alot of experience which is very needed. Ive got a month left on this one. And ive hated my self the whole time writing this. Its just not what ive wanted...

Finally! I agree. But with Ernest too. The films they nominate do deserve it and are better than the everyday film. Very valid point. But seriously. How many times do they screw it up? Every year im angered. Every year. I think its better for a director to not win one because then their put...

Ive heard that Kubrick had consider reinventing modern porn. I cant recall the name right now but i really truly wish he would have done that. And youve actually sort of compelled me to. Maybe when im real old. Ill watch it then die. Cirlce complete.

Very very valid point. I forgot to mention 2001. I still haven't got to see The Killing and Barry Lyndon. Small cities Blockbusters and National Videos majorly lack. Even on the Internet I couldn't find Lyndon. I just wish he would've made more. Guess thatxwas his artistic process and that's...

I love Kubrick of course. I've seen almost all of his films except A Clockwork Orange and never plan to. Hate rape. But his others films are amazing. I agree with everything you said except The acting is miraculous. In the Shining, Shelly shrieks continuously and is weak probably Kubricks...

I think There Will Be Blood is an absolute classic. And will be put in the top of the top in years time.

Zen. Yeah I agree with you. That would've been the smarter thing to do. I'll definitely look those up. It's a short on Two pill poppers and their close call with a drug dealer. It's interesting. I think I've improved tons from this short. I hope. Thanks Zen.

Thanks for the feedback man. I agree with what you said. I had a lot of mistakes on this. Me and my actor are working on branching him out acting wise. Thanks for even mention the Coens in the same post. Gave me a little confidence. Tomorrow were finishing up my next short and I'm taking...

Thanks for the ideas guys. Great point on the closet being used. Also, CF I had already planned on getting just the lower half of the body. More effective. Actor holding a rope is what I'm going to have to try. Thanks again guys.

Not sure if this is the right section but Im shooting a short that haves someone being hang/ hunged within a closet. Anyone have any suggestions?

Thnaks for the feedback. I just noticed that. Hate my keyboard. Very very good point on the handheld. Ill keep that in my mind. Also, fantastic point on the music. Ill use that in my next short that i edit. I felt the music cuts were blah myself. Thanks again!

Heres my latest short film. First time with and actually actor. Now first things first. Its bad. Very bad. Acting wise and even directing wise. We both know that. It was for practice. I learned a TON just from this two minute short and cant wait for my next one. The acting will be improved...

Thank you very much for your reply. I would like feedback in every single department you stated. Alright. Ive always heard show dont tell. How would i show my ending for instance? For this i would be the editor. But still agree. Should leave that out. I had always though Celtx cost money...

This is a short script i recently wrote. I would like any critiscim on it but more importantly i would like to have your opinions on how i could add to the story? Or any changes i could make to add more depth? It follows a salesman before and after apocalyptic times...

Heres one i just started. Mayday? Two brothers raised in a right wing household join a secret Republican society but after the younger brother is asked to infiltrate a rival left wing society his views begin to change. Sparking a feud between the two brothers. Political satire making fun at...

Awesome. Enjoyed that alot. Lots of cool shots too. Great gay guy too.

I have always loved creation and creating things. And my imagination runs wild at full force all day and night through a variety of subjects which is why i first became a writer. Scripts at first followed by poems,flash fiction, and raps but with writing im not good enough. i cant show without...