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I enjoyed it. I did feel the pacing was a little fast. Would have like to see some candid shots. You know, the "you-don't-know-your-being-filmed" shot. The comedy, and the delivery were pretty good.

I watched the first one you posted: I enjoyed the opening sequence. Personally I would have liked to see it even more dark and shadowy, to the point where everything is a suggestion of itself. With the fight scene, I would have liked it to be side lit with the cars, gain going with the "more...

Looks cool. I did find parts of it hard to understand. Like there is too much background noise. Could just be my ears though. :)

I enjoyed it

I agree with whiteopus. I would probably still check out the film though.

Dude on the left at the beginning, your lips are moving while the other guy is talking. :) A fun short.

I can't suspend disbelief when young people play old people. The story line was a bit sketchy to me, or I didn't catch something. IDK.

I've said this before, if you're going to to a fight scene, practice practice and practice some more. It's too easy for a fight to look fake. Your wasn't bad, but some of the shots were a little loose, tight, or late. Maybe you were doing this for effect. IDK Also, the fight scene kinda looked...

Looks like you guys had fun. Nice gun props.

Ah yes. I see them now. Must have missed it the first time around.

Sorry, I didn't get the narrative. I liked the look of it, and the music complimented the woman's voice nicely. But I couldn't follow whatever story was there.

Were they supposed to know who the intruder was, and killed him accidentally?? If so, I have the same problem with this short as I do with big budget movies that use this mechanism to advance a story line. If the intruder was known in that house then why would he sneak around around. Why...

Ep. 1: at 00:44, if you are asleep on your back, your mouth would be gaping much more than that. :)

Kind of obvious. No surprises.

The chick talking at the beginning seemed a little superfluous. Maybe if we could here the voice on the phone giving her instructions. Then a simple "okay" from here. ??? Developed super slow for me. Maybe if it had some music. I skipped to 3 min mark and kept skipping. I watch maybe a total...

I don't think I've ever remained up-right during an extended phone conversation. Should have reclined or something. Pretty funny though

The "voice" was a bit much for me. To me, having a more gentle voice lends some ambiguity as to whether the voice is benevolent or malevolent. Think of HAL from 2001. Just a thought. At 00:26 you gave a lot away by showing the guy unconscious on the gurney. Maybe go directly to the beach from...

I dig it. :)

I remember. I've been away as well.

To me, it was fine. The only thing I would point out (I'm sure you are aware) is, when you cycle the bolt, a casing should come out.