Recent content by Zaco32

Hey guys, I just wanted to let you know that I have made a lot of changes to my previous screenplay. I did not want to make another thread so hopefully I can continue to get more feedback here. You can find the changes through the same link. Thanks guys.

Thank you! How did the rest of it feel for you?

Hey, thanks for taking the time to read my screenplays!

Thanks for the feedback! We added the accident to the script today, I missed that and should of changed it. Thank you for pointing it out though!

Hello. I posted an earlier version of this. I've added more and made a lot of improvements. I just wanted some feedback. Thanks! LOGLINE: A young man defends his Grandfather from his deranged brother who has been blinded by his faith...

Thanks for the comments! I would eventually want to turn it into a longer screenplay but I'm trying to make a short out of it right now. I wrote it to get some people excited and maybe make it a project worth trying for.

Hey guys, This is my most recent screenplay I wrote with my girlfriend. This is our first draft and we are just look for some constructive criticism. Thank you! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZT0_jEa6uoKXWYvqQm8Wh071fjrp6gdDYbiqDa5jkJw/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks! Yeah, I know. I have a 18-55 kit lens I think it is. But I don't use it because the footage always comes out noisy even the dark spots when I'm out shooting in the sun. So I'm just working with the 50mm

A drama. I'm using a canon t3i with a kit lense but mostly my 50mm.

Here are some screen shots of a film I am working on. I will post more as the production continues. This is the first film I am doing where I have some knowledge of cinematography. I just wanted to share. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5.

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Hey guys. I've been trying to think of a way to recreate the spot light on front of a train. The only catch is that it needs to be battery operated. This light will be far away when it is in the film so it does not need to be anything fancy, just bright. Does anybody have a good source for a...

Good video. Thank you for the info!

Thanks for the tips! I will apply these and look out for these the next time I practice lighting. Yea, I suppose that I didn't spend much time using the key. I also thought a fill light would be great there. I used a 50mm lens. I know if I back up I can get more into the shot and then I crop...

Good question. I have 3 lights for the whole scene. I have one practical light, which is the one that is blown out. Two can lights. One that is clamped on to the top of the screen door, which is out of frame. That can light was angled towards the wall to soften it. The last can light was...