thanks for the adviseCool man! Congrats on your first film!
Constructive would be:
:12 actor looks at camera.
Also the actor breaks the plane :37 to :38 (if that was his own eye), look up the 180 degree rule.
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so a few adjustments and youre golden.
thanks!!!Not bad at all. Great first attempt. I liked the music in the beginning.
huh that is weird...if you ever find the name of the short please let me know.I feel like I have seen this exact same film as an 'mid' section to another longer length short film, pretty much shot for shot but with a different actor/location a now it bothering me because I cant remember the name of the short
thanks, it really means a lotI like it, especially that extreme close-up of the eye. Interesting colors and lighting too, agreed. Impressive start.