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Mirman10

Mirman10

My First video of 2015 is up! I put probably the most effort out of any project I've done on this one, so I want you guys to send that criticism my way. I think since my last film of this sort SCARED which is another thread, I think I've improved a bit and can't wait to get even better during 2015. Happy New Years Everyone!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2UNiwvFEUnU&list=UUK0C9aj9OoqE2OJweDx0OPA
 
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I'm not sure if this goes without saying, but the first scene is really too dark to see anything. I didn't like the shot of the mustard/yellow bottle with the actor blurred. The scene right after that starting at 3:33 was also too dark on the actors face.

The story was pretty entertaining. I also liked the music for the most part. Especially the horror type sounds you had. Keep it up!
 
ProfAnonymous said:
I'm not sure if this goes without saying, but the first scene is really too dark to see anything. The scene right after that starting at 3:33 was also too dark on the actors face.
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Yeah I was having some problems with low light because my lens at the time was only able to go to f4 (it was just the standard 18-55 that came with the camera) so it was difficult to get good shots. I shot most of this film before the 26th and on the 26th I bought a new lens that goes to f1.8 a nifty fifty which I used for the wide-angle chase scene. So hopefully I won't have issues with the lighting being so dark in the future!
 
I kinda dug it, despite some technical faults. Short had a decent feel to it. :)

I was having some problems with low light because my lens at the time was only able to go to f4 (...) I bought a new lens that goes to f1.8 (...) So hopefully I won't have issues with the lighting being so dark in the future!
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No, the reason you were having issues with bad lighting is because you had bad lighting. Swapping out a lens will not fix your lighting - you'll just be able to see how bad your lighting is with more clarity. ;)
 
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