Would anyone be available to help with criticising an edit?

I've just shot a couple of ads for a customer. I'm new to this having only started filming professionally 3.5 years ago. So would love another set of eyes on this. For obvious reasons, I can't put an unfinished edit online...

Would anyone be able to help by having a look at a couple of rough cuts? Just to give me an idea if your thoughts? Ideally someone from the UK if possible but I'm open to anyone...
 
Hi Paul, coming in a bit late, but I have time this week to give you feedback as seen through "European" eyes if that's of interest. I'm reasonably familiar with the UK ad style, as broadcast on Sky, ITV, C4 (as well as the similar content distributed on Irish channels) ... even if I generally make a point of trying to filter it out!
 
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