Thanks! Rig was borrowed from a friend and yes that pan shot was done from the road by car. Good call!
I am talking with a composer now so the sound and soundtrack should be better in the future.
Unfortunately color grade probably won't get much better. my computer is a POS macbook so it can't run resolve. I don't have access to proper grading tools.
I'd be game to try a hand at it for future episodes? I'm currently switching between Speedgrade to Resolve.
IDK why I didn't think of this earlier, but I'm likely going to rerelease episode 1 at some point. The composer I'm working with now is going to do custom music for it instead of the tracks that I downloaded and mixed.
So it wouldn't be wasted if you wanted to start with color there. Otherwise I'll let you know when the other are ready. I'm considering hold off until I have all 4 shorts ready, then I can do steady reliable release dates for the whole series. maybe a week or two apart each.