https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bw06aLKnYtAoN0JQaF9ZZmtqeFU/view
Does anyone have any tips on improving the screenplay, mainly the dialogue.
P.S. I'm aware that the formatting is a bit off, that's not what I want to know about.
Does anyone have any tips on improving the screenplay, mainly the dialogue.
P.S. I'm aware that the formatting is a bit off, that's not what I want to know about.